Upon this steamy and humid night
I think of such silken bodily delight
To bring each into passion’s reach
And to the other learn from and teach
Bring your wanting body over mine
Chosen have we to sixty nine
Take me down deep
Innerly let your tongue creep
Grind your hips with a roll
Guide my lips from clit to slit to hole
With every quiver and stroke
Give in to pleasure, release and soak.
Only to take back to the tip
And give sweet kiss with experienced lip
Inhale each others sexual scents
So each’s sexuality inflame and intense
Slow and easy at first
To lengthen the other’s sordid thirst
Eventually quicken the pace
Grinding your mound into my face
Tongue and fingers play
Until your knees give in and you splay
With with rapid flicks of my tongue in you deep
Cover me with your sweet cream to reap.
Firstly, I would like to thank the tireless efforts of the
Jingle community into giving a forum for the focus on the musings of such great
artists, though how the heck I slipped through I have no idea. I’m just tickled that some folks think that
the stuff that falls out of my head deserves some sort of recognition! The
person I would like to nominate is Black Swan poetry
Secondly I would like to apologize for the slowness in
answering those kind enough to comment on my posts and visiting all those out
there. Work has sort of go a little
loco; our staff in the past month has grown 300%, from the four of us to
twelve, and unfortunately the higher ups have decided to hire our new recruits
from the 17 yr old age group where common sense, giving a damn and effective
time management have yet to gestate. It
has created a new brand of work for me to do, much of which is spending nights
correcting the errors and anticipating the next day’s disasters. It doesn’t
help that I’ve been volunteered to create a quality control document, which Dr.
Phal keeps on insisting in helping with the presentation….
wow, just wow…..i really am liking this poem…..
speechless dude..
my link: http://mypoetrywriting.blogspot.com/2011/07/tears-in-rain.html
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Thank you!
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Holy smokes! It’s hot in here!
What a sensual delight. 😉
Mine’s here:
On This Orange-Hued Day
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BTW, I was so overheated, I forgot to say…Congratulations on the award!
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Thank you, you know, I’m always surprised when someone nominates me; I’m not a one for the spotlight unless its on a stage
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Thanks! Looking forward to reading your write!
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Well … That was nice
Totally amazing
BTW, Take a look on my Work ..
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/poetry-zone/
and my very recent stuff …
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2011/07/27/true-beauty/
Happy Rally !!!
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what a fine verse, perfect word play, thanks.
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you’re welcome!
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well deserved award, thanks for taking it, lovely nomination.
🙂
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I’m still ablush ’bout it, and its an honour that someone thinks I deserve one
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Great erotic writing, and also enjoyed the comments about work and the 17 year-olds. I know the syndrome well!
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Thank you! I really don’t understand the lack of work ethic and pride in doing a job to the best of your ability that seems to be around today. I was raised to perform to your best always, even if you did not like what you were doing, because it is a reflection on you whether it is overt or hidden. It is almost like the kids today have been conditioned to accept that they should be rewarded without putting in an effort.
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Lol great wordplay
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Thanks and I hope it would be percieved as alot more than playin’ with words!
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I forget how sexy your poems are, and always show up unprepared.
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lol – have no fear, often I am unprepared for what my brain decides to do too
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steamy 🙂 great writing you have here.
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Thank you, I’m a very visually orientated so I try to write as if it is the moment
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Oh wow sexy, love it!
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Thanks! Though I do hope ya lust it too!
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Congratulations on the award! As for the poem, if it wasn’t an art form you’d be raided. Your poem had my attention all the way. Well written!
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Thank ya kindly!
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I was trying to picture the images you describe in this poem, but then my battery went dead 🙂 Overheated I suspect?
Lovely!
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Glad you liked it – but for future reference you should never say “my battery went dead” to me – it provokes my mind to picture somethings that overheat my furnace!
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🙂 meant the laptop battery. I wonder what you meant.
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Oh, er, uhm, I meant the laptop too – I mean what I was thinking could sit atop your lap, I suppose…I think I’ve been working wth Dr. Phal for too long…..
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HHHHHHHOT! 🙂
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Glad ya found it so!
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oooooohh!
Someone other than me
Writes things they
Don’t want their mother to see.
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Hell, I imagine that the pictures are far more worse for me mother than the words!
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nice very cool….
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