Orange rouge hue of night’s arrival
Heighten’d by sheen’d ice crust’d snow
As such my weary legs portage’d through
When unannounce’d from aside
Doth the Heaven’s gift entrance steady’d footfall gaze
To afore where crystal’d ice dance in the sky anew.
Those two chestnuts roasting
Oer those ember’d lush lips
Swathe’d with deep ebony’d blanket of hair
How doth thine cherish’d visage shine
Illuminating fully the vista of eterne content.
Oh to be wrap’d snug in that caramel tinge’d warmth
Beholden freely with naught but perchance to spy a smile
Or a whisper’d touch along my cheek
That flushes e’ry pore pass’d o’er
Igniting each tendril of nerve with burst of passion.
Such Eden-esque bliss doth her presence invoke
Yet to know the prior result
Of one taste of succulent forbidden fruit;
To risk cast out to the barren parch
Be still a merciful memory’d haven to relapse within
Over unending question of if I haveth….
As always an interesting poem to read…thanks!
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Glad that you enjoyed it!
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such strong use of words. You are skilled
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You’re too kind – I wish it was skill, I am of the opinion that most of the stuff that I end up writing is more from just not knowing what I can or cannot or should or should not write – I’m sort of a garage sale kind of writer, I don’t know if it works or not, but if it’s only a quarter, I’ll take the chance!
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lovely word flow…
well penned, Happy Potluck.
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Thank you kindly!
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“Or a whisper’d touch along my cheek” lovely words nicely written
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thank you!
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You are the romantic.
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If only I was! I was utterly shocked recently when I was informed that holding my beer while I change the truck’s oil is not a date….
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winter fun, mesmerizing read!!! 🙂
enjoy the potluck, good job btw, I liked it
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/07/20/indifferent/
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Thank ye kindly, I shall be enjoying some good reads, looking forward to yours!
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This is vivid & smooth.
“Oh to be wrap’d snug in that caramel tinge’d warmth”…nice.
Nicely done!
Thanks for sharing & visiting my blog. I appreciate it.
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thank you, and believe me, it was a pleasure to read your writes!
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