Treading unbound from that dualistic solid form
Bandied as the solution of being only one
for nearly a quadrupled harvest moon
Hath I bemoaned –
Unheard
Unmissed
Unsatisfied
With shivering touch I reach out wistfully wanting;
A single sudden intake breath taken in:
Acknowledgment to potential though in a matter
That I was once to someone and beseeching to be so again
Though angel you deny
Within these eyes the description cries out truth
Come and sit,
Close thine eyes to slits in candlelight
Let me amuse and announce me to thee
By shadow dancing winsomely
An interesting verse…the imagery of previous lonliness seems strong to me but that is just my impression of the poem and then of finding new love.
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the beauty of poetry is that it means what it means to each individual – thanks for the comment!
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Regret at relationship lost, yearning for breath again.
Good reminders that we’re not there yet. There’s still time to breathe and love.
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Very true, very true – or at least lust
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confident piece, very well put.
🙂
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Had a certain unearthly feel.
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Glad you caught that!
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Very Nice Poetry with an amazing Imagination
Great Work of Creativity !! Highly Expressive !!
It was indeed enjoyable after reading this one !!
Anyways, Take a look some of my Poetry Collections …
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/poetry-zone/
some of my Haiku Collections
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/creative-challenges/the-haiku-challenge/
and also, on my very recent Work as well
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2011/08/15/india-of-my-dream/
!!! Happy Rally !!!
Cheers !!
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Thanks and I shall attend to doing some perusing of yours!
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Oh I like this very much. Strange words you weave.
Melanie
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Thank you very much Melanie,- most people just say that I’m just strange!
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Loneliness ended can be a sweet relief! Powerful and a pleasure!
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Glad you liked it!
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Masterful as always.
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/09/01/ive-got-you/
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Far too kind of you, my good sir!
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To me, it speaks of someone who has become a spirit and they are wishing once again to take a breath and inhabit a body. I’ll bet that happens!
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More often than not I suspect, though with some of my experiences/delusions, I find most of them are quite unaware they’re dead…..
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I read it out loud and it is beautiful 🙂
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well, thank you very kindly – sometimes I do come up with things that don’t sound like I’ve been shacked up in a bear’s cave for six months – yes, that doesn’t make much sense but I worked 16 hours today so i’m lucky I’m not sitting naked in a puddle of my own drool……
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