Why don’t you just
Bite me!
How could I have let you
Invite me?
To
Excite me?
To
Delight me?
Why don’t you just
Bite me!
At least
Spite me
To show that there was some care
Despite me…
Why don’t you just
Bite me!
How could I have let you
Invite me?
To
Excite me?
To
Delight me?
Why don’t you just
Bite me!
At least
Spite me
To show that there was some care
Despite me…
A.B. Thomas mutter fluka 
This actually reminds me of a relationship [that I didn’t really have] with a girl in high school. She really played with my head until I figured out there was nothing there. Pretty long time ago, but it seems like I ain’t forgetting. Nice write.
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Thanks, and I’ve sort been there too – though from the opposite side, so to speak. I’m a just a might dense to the non verbal (and hell, verbal) cues for the most part and there have been a few times where I’ve gone out with a woman and two weeks later find out that, in their minds, she and I had been in a very disassociative relationship and we had broken up because my emotional distance – which was not surprising to me as I had been oblivious that a single date meant a relationship.
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Provocative and nice to read… Are you asking someone to bite you? I just hope she really invited you and has strong jaws to make your wishes come true. 🙂
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I wish!
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Lovely, the bite me, (fight me? ) spite me rhyme.
“Posted in poetry, “normal” ” 🙂
This poem reminds me of “Silence of the lambs” somwhow?
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what a cool perspective, totally unexpected – but when I look it like that, neat!
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I like this piece A.B. I enjoyed reading it and the way it flowed.
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thank you kindly!
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what a fun word play.
enjoyed it.
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Glad you liked it!
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clever rhyming with undercutting undertones … well done!! 🙂
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Thanks!
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Ha! I like that!
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Haha. I can relate to this! 🙂 I’d like to copy, paste, and send it to him now.
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lol!
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makes me think of my ex… i love how this shoots straight to the point.
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thank you, often I diffuse the point of the write but this one I went straight for it, glad it seems to have been effective!
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I just re-read it and it made me laugh again.
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glad it did! usually it takes me standin’ nekkid in front of a woman to make her laugh…
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Adorably cool.
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Thank ya kindly!
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